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閱讀:飲用牛奶對人類健康有一些消極影響。

Ÿ 盡管有補鈣健骨骼的說法,但過量飲用(每天超過200grams),人體骨骼會變得更加脆弱。

• 牛奶中含有antibiotics抗生素,人體由喝牛奶攝入后,就會產生一些抗體,如果后期遇到病毒感染需要注射抗生素時,就不利于健康了。

• 想攝入合理的營養,飲用牛奶沒有必要,可以從其他蔬菜,豆類及海鮮中攝取,這些都能滿足日常所需。

聽力:閱讀的說法是沒有說服力的。

• 牛奶中的半乳糖(D-galactose)是導致骨骼問題的原因,如果我們飲用發酵的(fermented)牛奶,是會減少骨骼脆弱的問題的。

• 牛奶中是含有抗生素,但是一般銷售公司只接受那些能夠經得住嚴格監測標準的農場來提供奶源,即抗生素含量達標的農場。

• 人們從其他蔬菜,豆類及海鮮中攝取的營養及維生素的量是比較少的,而從牛奶中攝取的量比較足,能夠滿足人體所需。

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Topic: Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (ages 5 to 10)? Why?

A Being helpful to others

B Being honest

C Being well-organized

Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer.

解題思路:選擇A

• 可以培養孩子樂于助人的品質,收獲精神快樂。(個人角度)

• 能夠幫助孩子更好的適應社會。(社會角度)

• 誠然,其他兩項價值觀對孩子來說也重要,但是這些孩子后期都可以很容易的學到(或是書本上也會教的),而A選項難度更大,影響也更深遠,需要從小培養。

Sample Answer:

Childhood is the golden age of people’s lives because it is a time of physical growth and great leaps forward intellectually and socially. Being helpful, honest and well organized are values that parents and educators try to instill in children from a very young age, but I would argue that among these values, honesty would be the most important one to share with a young child.

First and foremost, honesty is the cardinal principle of conducting oneself. Imparting honesty into children can hold them accountable for their behavior and teach them how to distinguish right from wrong from a young age. Unlike adults, children are normally unaware of the consequence of telling lies, and teaching them the value of honesty can help them realize how to act with integrity and confidence. For example, children who are conscious of being honest are more likely to contribute positively to the whole society in the future and will never defraud their clients and customers in workplace. In contrast, students who are dishonest may plagiarize other people’s thesis and fail to achieve success even though they perform well at school.

Besides, being honest can help us win the trust and respect from others, even from those who are unfamiliar with us. It is widely known that childhood is an important period for children to learn lifelong social and emotional skills they need. Therefore, making them capable of being honest helps children learn how to behave in a more socially acceptable way. Just imagine, an honest child always gets along well with everyone at school, with a bunch of good friends around him. When he grows up, people are more willing to collaborate with him as well as to give him a hand when he gets into troubles. On the contrary, a dishonest child will be looked down upon by others and be regarded as a public enemy.

Undeniably, being helpful and well organized are both important qualities, which do benefit children in their own way. The young generation can learn responsibility and find enjoyment in helping others. But the fact is, 5 to 10-year-old children are too young to be able to take care of themselves, not to speak of giving a hand to other people. As for the organizational skill, it just makes little sense since kids of that age are naturally active and naughty. Overemphasis on children’s organizational ability would have an adverse impact on their growth. If children are required to be well organized at any time, their creativity and imagination will be stifled.

To sum up, I’m not saying that being helpful and well-organized are of no use, but compared to the importance of honesty, these two values can be crossed off the priority list.

責任編輯:zhoujiaming

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